Hogaku Ageha

Character Description

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Basic Information

Profile Name: Tret16
Character Name: Hogaku Ageha
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Height: 5`10
Weight: 170
Personality: While around other students he`s a nice guy and very friendly... Everyone seems to like him due to his constant helping of everyone. But when the student aren`t around he has a twisted mind and often acts superior.
Relationship Status: single, but only because he prefers it that way.

Basic Info Continued

Grade: 12
Position: Student (athlete)
Academic Specialty: Gym, Japanese history
Combat Style: He took hand to hand martial arts training since he was able to walk.
Weapons: Books, athletics uniforms. and medical box.

History

Ageha was raised by his mother due to his father leaving her and never coming back. This didn`t sit well with Ageha and as he grew up he began to blame his mother for his father leaving. This also cause Ageha to look at women as simply a tool for him. The more he could minipulate them the better. His conditioned worsened when him and his mother began to have money problem which cause her to go into prostitution. By this time Ageha was 10 years old, a time in his life where he was ready to define himself. Seein his mother bring in men after men and then seeing them leave showed Ageha another side of life... The harsh side... As he grew up he found it easier to hide this from people his age and simply treat women that he knew he could minipulate as animals.

Character Stats

Stats are more of a tentative judge of one character's ability compared to another and are up the the RPers discretion as to what they mean in most cases so long as it isn't overboard. A stat can't be set higher than 5 and they raise in increments of 0.5. One may have up to 12 stat points allocated over all 4 categories.

Stamina:3
Speed: 3
Strength: 2
Intelligence:4

Abilities

The most complicated part of the profile! Here you create a powerful special ability for your character to possess. For now, unless problems arise, there aren't many restrictions on what sort of technique or power your character can possess, but over time it can be evolved into a stronger form of sorts to make it more useful and versatile in combat. How many times the ability can evolve is up to mod discretion, but it's also up to the mods just when it can be evolved. Listing evolved forms here isn't necessary until you want to learn them.

Name of Ability: Malcheese Door
Description: Malcheese Door is a large black sphere that appears in Ageha`s hand and grow to about the size of himself. This sphere can be controlled by Ageha but moves at a slow rate making it easy to dodge. When this sphere touched a person it will explode once making contact. It will not explode if it touches lifeless objects. Only when it is in contact with source of power.

Name of Ability: Malcheese Lance
Description: Malcheese Lance is the result of Ageha restricte the destructive power and the strain it puts on his mind. Ageha shrinks the black sphere into the size of a marble and then shoots it in a straight line like a bullet. The advantage of this version is that it's speed is increased due to it's small size.

sorry for the big pics... i don't know how to resize and also don't feel like goin through the trouble... lol

This seems far too powerful even as a final ability. Basically what I'm reading is that there's no way to fight it except to run away and hope something happens to stop it. This at least needs to be stoppable. Combat against this wouldn't even be a contest so far as I can tell.

well the is a way to fight this... The raw version can't really be used, without having fatal reprocusion. so once fired the user loses conciousness and in order for the enemy to dodge all they need to do is turn off there ability since that how Malcheese Door functions, by sensing other abilities... and if it's dodge then Ageha is open for attack since he's no longer concious... once Ageha get's to the second stage of his ability, it loses it's homing skills and only travels in a straight line...

the problem with that is that not everyone is going to know that it homes in on their abilities, and so therefore aren't likely to turn their powers off to "combat" it. In fact, some people are more likely to try to punch it first, in which case the result would be them being erased from the face of the earth. To pass it, this is going to have to have an effect that is more acceptable =/ no eating through anything it touches, including other powers, which basically eliminates any form of defense whatsoever.

hhhmmm, alright then how about when it comes to object it completely erases it but when it comes in contact with people it simply explodes... Would that be a better effect?

meh... objects can still include other people's abilities, so then it can just eat through other people's powers still. I don't really know why you need to have it erasing things...you can just make it explode period when it hits something, or have it do some sort of other damage...it doesn't need to make you go unconscious either. if you still want it to have a side effect, then it can give him a massive migraine or something, idk

changed... hopefully it's to your satasfactory...lol

Forgot to fill in grade and to change your lance ability to match the rest.

fixed

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